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It was always a bad sign when Jody started writing on the walls.

Usually it meant she was off her meds.  Sometimes it meant they just weren't strong enough.

Occasionally it meant that the Timmens were back.

Jody's walls were usually spotless.  She always used pencil, a small mercy for whoever cleaned up after her.  She never let spiders nest in the corners, and flies avoided her room altogether.  Even when the Timmens weren't there, the flies were afraid.

Jody kept many different colors of pencil.  When she wrote, her pristine white walls became a strange kaleidoscope.  The orderlies would halt in their tracks, staring at the riot boxing in the tiny floor.  Sometimes they would murmur to each other, picking out patterns in the lines.  Doctors to other patients would come to peer at the spectacle.

The walls were never photographed.

When Jody ran out of pencils, she would stand in the precise center of the room, seemingly catatonic.  She would not eat nor drink nor sleep until resupplied.

When the walls were completely covered, she would lie face-up on the floor.  Her expression never, ever changed.  She simply waited.

After hours or days, she would sit up and allow the walls to be made bare once more.  She would go about her life, simple and uncaring, until whatever time the writing would begin again.

The orderlies did their best to keep her happy and healthy.  But they were afraid.  Jody was getting old.

One day, when the Timmens came, Jody would not be there to write them away.
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Was lying on the bed with a notebook and pencil. Could not think of a single thing to write, so I just doodled, enjoying the feel of the pencil dragging across the paper. I looked at the wall and had the sudden urge to write on it, and the first line came fully-formed.

I was trying to think what the writing would mean. Sometimes she was off her meds. Sometimes the meds weren't strong enough. And sometimes . .

. . the Timmens were born.

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:iconherzeleid1995:
This is really freaking good... It feel like a lead in to something, but I know it probably isn't. With writing like this, it is kind of disappointing that it won't develop into a narrative, when you already have people waiting for more.

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"Babel d'escaliers et d'arcades, c'etait un palais infini."

"Nothing is incredulous, but instead is nigh on fundamentality."

*Disregard all above text as heresay, as it is inadmissable in a court of law.*

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